Writing Similes

Ice-Cream Similes

We were learning to write similes to make our writing more interesting. We have decided to practise writing these by thinking about ice-cream. Do you agree with our comparisons?

Phoebe:

• as soft as a white pillow
• as cold as a snowman 

Annabelle:

• as delicious as milk bottle lollies
• as melty as chocolate

Grace:

• as rainbow coloured as a rainbow cake
• as soft as a sausage

Leandra:

• as little as a little puppy dog
• as soft as a bunny

Harry: 

• as cold as the south pole
• as soft as fresh bread

Balin:

• as freezing as frost
• as tasty as pumpkin pie

Anya:

• as delicious as spaghetti bolognese
• as soft as my cat's fur

Brooke:

• as puffy as Marge Simpson's hair
• as exciting as working on a chrome book

Hannah:

• as delicious as pavlova
• as yummy as cookies and cream ice-cream with a flake in it

Abigail:

• as soft as a feather
• as crunchy as a biscuit

PJ:

• as cold as the North Pole
• as delicious as an American hot dog

Nathan:

• as exciting as going hunting
• as runny as chocolate in the sun 

Lucas:

• as delicious as chocolate milk
• as exciting as getting a surprise

Logan:

• as cold as Pluto
• as green as a frog

Sefton:

• as delicious as hot chocolate
• as soft as wet cream

Chloe:

• as delicious as candy floss 
• as exciting as going to MOTAT

Annabelle:

• as big as a book
• as delicious as cheese cake

Kayla:

• as big as the Sky tower
• as melty as ice

Keegan:

• as big as a t-rex
• as soft as a cushion

Joe:

• as mouthwatering as chocolate
• as soft as my dog's fur

Thomas:

• as soft as a fluffy blanket
• as runny as chocolate

Shannyn:

• as soft as squishy cream
• as melty as chocolate left in the sun

Isabel:

• as soft as marshmallows
• as big as a tower