Monday, 29 August 2016

Writing Similes


Ice-Cream Similes

We were learning to write similes to make our writing more interesting. We have decided to practise writing these by thinking about ice-cream. Do you agree with our comparisons?










Phoebe:
  • as soft as a white pillow
  • as cold as a snowman 

Annabelle:
  • as delicious as milk bottle lollies
  • as melty as chocolate
Grace:
  • as rainbow coloured as a rainbow cake
  • as soft as a sausage
Leandra:
  • as little as a little puppy dog
  • as soft as a bunny




Harry

  • as cold as the south pole
  • as soft as fresh bread
Balin:
  • as freezing as frost
  • as tasty as pumpkin pie

Anya:

  • as delicious as spaghetti bolognese
  • as soft as my cat's fur

Brooke:
  • as puffy as Marge Simpson's hair
  • as exciting as working on a chrome book

Hannah:
  • as delicious as pavlova
  • as yummy as cookies and cream ice-cream with a flake in it




Abigail:

  • as soft as a feather
  • as crunchy as a biscuit
PJ:
  • as cold as the North Pole
  • as delicious as an American hot dog
Nathan:
  • as exciting as going hunting
  • as runny as chocolate in the sun 


Lucas:
  • as delicious as chocolate milk
  • as exciting as getting a surprise
Logan:
  • as cold as Pluto
  • as green as a frog


Sefton:

  • as delicious as hot chocolate
  • as soft as wet cream
Chloe:
  • as delicious as candy floss 
  • as exciting as going to MOTAT
Annabelle:
  • as big as a book
  • as delicious as cheese cake
Kayla:
  • as big as the Sky tower
  • as melty as ice

Keegan:

  • as big as a t-rex
  • as soft as a cushion
Joe:
  • as mouthwatering as chocolate
  • as soft as my dog's fur


Thomas:

  • as soft as a fluffy blanket
  • as runny as chocolate
Shannyn:
  • as soft as squishy cream
  • as melty as chocolate left in the sun
Isabel:
  • as soft as marshmallows
  • as big as a tower







Sunday, 21 August 2016

Questioning

We are learning to write questions. Some questions can be thin...


Some questions can be thick...

Here are some of our questions about our investigation into technology. 


Sometimes we have other questions too...


Come and have a look at our wonder wall to see more of our questions.