The Peacock

I will describe this peacock to you. It has light green, blue,  orange, white and yellow on it's tail. It also has a spotty body. It has a pretty body too. It is a bird but it is not native to New Zealand. 

By Balin

The Peacock

The peacock i green, blue, orange and white. The male peacock shows off to the females. It is pretty because of the colourful feathers. It is a boy and they are prettier than the girl peacocks because it is colourful. 

By V

I am going to describ the peacock to you. The peacock has a blue, green and orange tail and it has a blue body. It also has whit around it's eyes and it shows off tho the girls with it's pretty tail. 

By Zara

WALT write a description

SC

• I can plan by brainstorming adjectives
• I can write a sentence to explain what I am writing about
• I can describe the object
• I can add a comment as an ending.

Goldfish

I am going to describe the weirdest looking goldfish in the world to you. This goldfish has a yellow and orange body and a see through and white tail. It's also wavy.

The cheeks are round like bubbles, balls or balloons. It has a little fat body. Inside the cheeks are little veins that look like wrinkles. It has a triangular shape tail. I think it has the smallest eyes of all the fish. 

I hope when you see one you will be able to recognise it.

By Eddie