Wednesday, 27 July 2016
Factual Report writing and Slide shows
We were learning about how animals are impacted on through weather changes and the choices we make. We investigated some animals, their habitats and discovered what impacted on these animals.
Read more about our inquiries by watching these slideshows. They are our first attempts and we are very proud of them.
Factual Report - Great White Shark
Factual Report - Great White Shark
Giving feedback to my buddy.
Today we were learning to give feedback to a buddy. We first read through the recounts, making sure we understood everything. Then we checked the stories again and we looked for something that was done well and something that could be improved on. We shared it with our buddies and they wrote it down in their books. This will be the next step for our writing.
How am I doing
We are learning to check our writing.
After writing our stories, we spend time on rereading, improving and editing our spelling. We also check how we are going with our use of ideas, capital letters, etc. Here is an example of how we use colour coding to do this.
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