WALT write a description

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• I can plan by brainstorming adjectives
• I can write a sentence to explain what I am writing about
• I can describe the object
• I can add a comment as an ending.

Goldfish

I am going to describe the weirdest looking goldfish in the world to you. This goldfish has a yellow and orange body and a see through and white tail. It's also wavy.

The cheeks are round like bubbles, balls or balloons. It has a little fat body. Inside the cheeks are little veins that look like wrinkles. It has a triangular shape tail. I think it has the smallest eyes of all the fish. 

I hope when you see one you will be able to recognise it.

By Eddie